«Правка или цена за новую работу. тема members of the body»

<div><p>амечания руководителя:</p> <p>The thesis is written in such poor English that it is impossible to understand it: - you do not know basic words, your thesis seems to be written by google translator, instead of writing "part of the body", you write "Members of the body", - there are sentences like stoning is stoning; death is death</p> <p>- grammar is horrible, there are words missing, so this what you have sent me is a very preliminary version of the thesis which you should not show your supervisor... My other comments are in the attach.</p> <p>I just wanted to stress:</p> <ol> <li>summary does not look like summary, summary should have 0,5 p. and tell us what is the main thesis, what are the main questions which you ask yourself, and what is the structure of the work 2, in the main text there is a mess, pre-historian ages, antiquity, made ages or modern times are mixed</li> <li>footnotes are badly written - there is a difference between footnotes and bibliography</li> <li>poor literature, 1 footnote on the page and often ibidem is not a good signal</li> <li>strange symbols in the work suggest that it is sort of plagiarism</li> <li>you cannot write that scientists claim something and do not cite any scientists...you cannot write that something was popular etc. without mentioning any source...because in other way your work is not academic work, it is just random collection of your thoughts.</li> </ol> <p>to summarise, before sending me a new version you need to have your work checked by native, you need to add literature, data must be supported by sources, cut information which is not needed...a lot of work to do..</p></div>